Try and keep the same energy thorough out the mix cause you hype it up kind of when zindabad yaarian comes in. You also need to work on your transitions because zindabad yaarian just kind of plays right after matching. Your mix also gets off beat around 1:22. Also try avoiding using too many random sounds like the random chanjars and the doppler whooshes @ 1:21. You also need to work on your sound selection of loops, listen to some other mixers on SoundCloud like Pablamix, Gsingh, chaMak, etc and listen to their sound selection.
Other than that the mix is alright for a beginner.