love the eminem from toysoldiers/tried so hard. These are good
still got to work on doing transitions. I mentioned on your album that sometimes verses are cut short... 1:46-> Em-"This ain't what I'm in hip-hop for, it's not why I got in it "
The 'its not why i got in it' gets cut off. I know there may be some issues of em's flow and matching it before the next line comes in, but you got to figure out a way to end the line cleanly. It's such a sick verse and it bumps hard and then it doens't cut out, it fades really awkwardly and kills a bit of momentum. If you fix really minor things like that, this could be a really sweet remix (as opposed to a school dance mix)
nice job