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Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« on: July 25, 2009, 02:17:11 AM »
Hey guys..
Punjabi Sher is a young team from Michigan that is around the age of 15...This is out latest performance..

Please criticize!  We know we need to improve a lot, but we need your guys intake as well..

FYI: We used a similar segment like NYPD for Sonay De Taweet Warga..We used it because we thought it was really nicely choreographed and give them all the credit for that part, if it was a big performance we wouldn't have used it..and that's obviously same for a competition..

Were still learning and need much to inquire..so please share your thoughts...We hope to compete in the future!



P.S: Anybody want the mix, let me know
« Last Edit: July 28, 2009, 11:45:37 AM by Gsimz »

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Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra
« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2009, 02:23:07 AM »
pretty sick, i liked it

i felt like some ppl were jus more into it then others, i jus saw like not everyone on the same energy level.
The sapp part was sorta skechy. And that guys shorts were showing  :P

It wouldn't hurt to post the mix
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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra
« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2009, 02:35:45 AM »
pretty sick, i liked it

i felt like some ppl were jus more into it then others, i jus saw like not everyone on the same energy level.
The sapp part was sorta skechy. And that guys shorts were showing  :P

It wouldn't hurt to post the mix

Thanks man!
Lol I was the one in the blue shorts :P and will post the mix when it get the time..

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2009, 05:57:26 AM »
on the positives that mix was sickkkkkkkkkk (maybe a few too many tunes in there tho ... i swear no song ran for longer than 10 secs) ... outfits wer wkd ... paggs looked wkd ... but dancing was average man ... some of u guys r doin moves really half heartedly ... especially in the sapp routine n ur doin the moves kinda wrong ... but i guess ur young n a new team ... ull slowly learn dat ... i think if u guys r learnin from videos... jus watch all the teams from PUNJAB ... khalsa college... DAV college ... teams like that... then u can pick up the correct way of doin moves. type in BHANGRA JALANDHAR in youtube ... n a big playlist comes up ... KEEP PRACTICING lads ... well done

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #4 on: July 26, 2009, 01:29:13 PM »
on the positives that mix was sickkkkkkkkkk (maybe a few too many tunes in there tho ... i swear no song ran for longer than 10 secs) ... outfits wer wkd ... paggs looked wkd ... but dancing was average man ... some of u guys r doin moves really half heartedly ... especially in the sapp routine n ur doin the moves kinda wrong ... but i guess ur young n a new team ... ull slowly learn dat ... i think if u guys r learnin from videos... jus watch all the teams from PUNJAB ... khalsa college... DAV college ... teams like that... then u can pick up the correct way of doin moves. type in BHANGRA JALANDHAR in youtube ... n a big playlist comes up ... KEEP PRACTICING lads ... well done

Thanks brotha..and I will post the mix when i get the chance

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2009, 02:20:39 PM »
Looks great, no spontaneous head movements every other beat though, although it's natural because of the pump the music and crowd gives you, it makes the performance and synchronization look worse. Otherwise good job !
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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2009, 04:06:05 PM »
Lol. One of the mans has a over-excitingly nakhra

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #7 on: July 26, 2009, 11:09:06 PM »
Looks great, no spontaneous head movements every other beat though, although it's natural because of the pump the music and crowd gives you, it makes the performance and synchronization look worse. Otherwise good job !

Thanks man..

Lol. One of the mans has a over-excitingly nakhra

Hahaha thanks for noticing....

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #8 on: July 26, 2009, 11:34:26 PM »
i think one of the guys in the shika segment was on a different leg than every1 else in the beginning kinda
-some of the moves looked kinda weird b/c of formations like at 3:30 like i think different footwork shud be used if ur gonna change a formation and turn too

the little short kid...hes the 1 on board for iasa next yr rite he was sickk...and def gsimz ur sick as well especially at the iasa show good performance

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #9 on: July 27, 2009, 01:23:22 AM »
Couple of things:

Open saaps/shikke up to full lengths

watch transition steps, people tend to move their shoulders or arms at different angles and energy than others when switching

Really finish steps (1:14)

Dance looks dirty(good and bad haha) and a lot of cleanliness and looking together will just be resolved by stressing how to do the moves properly

watch the punjabna transition jhoomer and watch the transition into jhoomer and youll get an idea what Im talking about


Seemed to get cleaner as you go.  bedi round five minutes was ill

Dance is good.  Mix is sick(but you already knew this g).  By the way are you the one with dark shorts? Pin that shit.

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2009, 08:34:12 PM »
- If your shykke are too stiff try putting mustard oil on them and it will also give a nice darker color
- Fix your posture in all the slow parts of shykka, and fix all your legs while dancing with khunda
-Hold khundey properly.  First of all, the hook should face in to you at all times.  Secondly, it should be held much lower about 6 inches from the bottom.  Use your thumb to help support.  Make sure everyone holds it the same and keep them straight.  I think your form is good through most of it but some of the boys look pretty bad
- 1:30/1:40 look at the head of the khunda
- Jhummar:  Fix your hands.  Keep them in proper morni and straighten up arms.  When not in morni, keep your hands as neat open palms with fingers closed (this applies to almost all moves as well).  Also jhummar, speak from your shoulders! Bounce them! Don't just walk around.
- 2:50 pataka =S open up armsss
- 3:15 Jugni should be all about your shoulders/chest bouncing.  Just bounce shoulders up and down.  No need to twitch/wiggle and keep your hands in a morni
- Sial Kothi/Dhamaal = When you have your hands up in the air just use 1 finger
- 4:40 phumaniyan :S fixx it all upp
- 4:55 that hand that comes out and across should be at chest-level
- 5:12 watch any live team and fix your arms on that move
- 5:17 to 5:21  make your arms bigger why are you guys dancing like t-rex?

Good luck guys keep it up, it's awesome to see more bhangra coming outta Michigan espp Canton :)


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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #11 on: July 27, 2009, 09:56:49 PM »
bad ass mix, good job!

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« Reply #12 on: July 28, 2009, 02:15:03 AM »
bad ass mix, good job!
Thanks harman...

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize!
« Reply #13 on: July 28, 2009, 11:45:19 AM »
The mix..
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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« Reply #14 on: July 28, 2009, 11:51:21 AM »
vohat sona mix yarr lol
chakde phate :D

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« Reply #15 on: July 28, 2009, 11:52:28 AM »
The mix..

:O howd you attach the picture to the mix?! kacheriyanch mele lagde ;) my favourite track of all time!

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« Reply #16 on: July 28, 2009, 02:01:46 PM »
Gsimz..you are straight up NASTY  ;D
I talk a lot of shit.. I mean it all. You may not like it.. Build a bridge and get over it.

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« Reply #17 on: July 28, 2009, 02:56:28 PM »
love'd the mix :D

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« Reply #18 on: July 28, 2009, 05:53:54 PM »

the mix was killer

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Re: Punjabi Sher Bhangra Please criticize! + Mix
« Reply #19 on: July 28, 2009, 11:35:39 PM »
The mix..


:O howd you attach the picture to the mix?! kacheriyanch mele lagde ;) my favourite track of all time!


I did it from itunes, the link explains it pretty well..

http://support.apple.com/kb/HT1409