yea really good intro...falls apart at around :58 when chorus comes in (the overlay mashup doesn't work right). Abhi is right, every 8-16 beats theres a different pattern and there's no time to develop anything (2:05 for instance it just cuts to a different beat and different vocal, kind of abrupt).
gets better with relistens, but still a little raw and ADD, it's cool to switch up the beat but it should happen when you want emphasis on something (like a breakdown). Try to weave the the beginning beat throughout and only cut away right before a chorus or something
definitely worth putting in effort and fixing up though
