the two main things i think you guys need to work on are getting your knees higher on certain moves and getting lower on others. overall, you guys have pretty good energy and you seem really enthusiastic, but i think this fervor needs to be channeled a little better into the actual dance. you can really see this in the beginning; the dude on the left is just going buck wild and it honestly looks really sloppy, especially when, at the same time, the purple pagg guy is barely trying. you shouldn't express your energy to the point that it interferes with you being able to perform moves correctly. the beginning is also a good example of how much higher your knees all need to be: the dude in the middle front is barely even bending them, leave alone raising them. same thing for the move immediately preceding the chafha (0:49). the chafha itself is being done wrong--you're supposed to kick to the side, not the front.
this is what it should look like. jhummar was goodl; definitely your best segment. mirza to putt sardaran de was sort of weird;
this is what it should look like, more or less. same lack of high knees problem with the dhamaal.
work on standardizing and synchronizing, and you guys will have a good team; everything's just a little unfocused at the moment.
