Me singing Lishkarey tere kokey by dj sanj and karan mc

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Jabar Jung

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I'm not a musician, but I think:

-The rhythm is missing, may be have a dholki loop playing in the background.
-Not sure if I am correct, correct me if i am wrong, you're missing half notes when you end the chorus and somewhere in between the verses too.
-Also doing "eh hey hey hey"

baaki good luck man
 

monisingh

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Jabar Jung said:
I'm not a musician, but I think:

-The rhythm is missing, may be have a dholki loop playing in the background.
-Not sure if I am correct, correct me if i am wrong, you're missing half notes when you end the chorus and somewhere in between the verses too.
-Also doing "eh hey hey hey"

baaki good luck man

yeah I need to get some loops in their and im not that good at harmonium yet time will tell and yeah the eh hey hey thanks for the feedback jabar
 

Manu

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There's a fine line between being witty and being a douche.


Please don't act the latter.




In terms of the actual singing:
-practice your sargams like they're your life
-the melodies off
-re-listen to the song cuz something doesn't sound right with the chorus
 

monisingh

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thanks for the feedback will work on the points mentioned and practice the song a bit more :)
 
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