Swi said:
Not feeling it at all bro sorry
It's way to busy at points and all the melodies/pitches dont' converge and they definitely aren't balanced properly. I think if you just had replay and moorni that would definitely work cause that seems to go in and out of sounding good but it clashes with the riff from the other punjabi song (can't remember the name of it).
I think theres potential here, but Swis right on a lot of the technical aspects...The vocals are too low and are too condensed because of the EQing...you need to give it a fuller sound (its tough without the acapella, but can be messed around with the right amount of reverb and still leaving in enough bass from the original track and raising the bass on the instrumental). I think this could sound very nice it was smoother and cleaner, rather than so busy at times