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A little glimpse of Sher Foundation Website

itnom

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Hi Everyone,
Here is a little glimpse of our website : www.sherfoundation.com. We are estimating a proper launch within the next 2 - 3 months. Stay tuned for more information. Thanks! P.S - Please click on the "enter" button for more info :)

Special thanks to:
Music : Pavan Macdaddy
Website: Lali Sehmi

Monti Sehmi
Team Sher Foundation
 

juggyb

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sick site....lali doing this thing in india still and pavan has the mixes locked as always!


but bruin 09....its going down!
 

kinnell

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Not bad at all! It's very clean and stylistic. A few things to note:

1. First of all, when typing the contact form - The name, subject, email form have an Arial-esque font but the comments form have a Courier-esque font. It's a discrepancy that can be easily fixed.

2. In this style, less is more, which has been done very tactfully in the layout. However, you gotta make everything really balanced. In the side-panel, in terms of fonts:

Performances (TITLE) - Times Roman (Serif Font)
Performance 1 (ITEM) - Arial (Sans Serif Font)
Performance 2 (ITEM) - Arial (Sans Serif Font)
Performance 3 (ITEM) - Arial (Sans Serif Font)

Contact Us (TITLE) - Times Roman (Serif Font)
Form 1 (ITEM) - Times Roman (Serif Font)
Form 2 (ITEM) - Times Roman (Serif Font)
Form 3 (ITEM) - Times Roman (Serif Font)

That's another discrepancy that can easily be fit. Most of the time, TITLES take a Serif Font and anything underneath takes a Sans-Serif Font. If you simply change the forms fonts to Arial a Sans Serif Font, you get a better sense of balance, which makes this style stand out so much more. Plus, there should be multiple lines in the comments box!

3. Finally, a quick coding discrepancy you could fix. If you click the side and start writing the form. And then you click the Sher Foundation logo and the side bar disappears. When you get the side bar again, the entire form is empty. You should maintain the form data even if the side bar is closed. With this format, you can very easily lose the sidebar so you want to make sure that if someone wrote a very long love letter to Sher Foundation, it still stays there. :)

Can't wait to see it when it's done.
 

Basim

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A decent start Lali. I'll look foward toward its progress.

Major props to kinnell for the detailed analysis & constructive criticism.. those are the types of comments people need to get better at what they do (whether it be bhangra or creating a website).

~ Basim :)
 

kinnell

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Basim said:
A decent start Lali. I'll look foward toward its progress.

Major props to kinnell for the detailed analysis & constructive criticism.. those are the types of comments people need to get better at what they do (whether it be bhangra or creating a website).

~ Basim :)
Kinnell? Constructive Criticism? Something must be aloof here! ;D
 
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