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Not bad. It had potential to be much more so it left me with a bit of disappointment at the end.

First of all, pictures need to come in from random sides and angles. Making it come in from one side ONLY works well if the camera angle is rotating faster (aka you see more of the city, faster). If it slides slowly, then the video loses attention fast.

Second of all, the ending with the logo looks too cheap. Having the logo come out of the moon when the lightning strikes the needle tower? Eeek. Things like that went out of style a long time back. I would recommend zooming into the needle tower (like you did), slow fade to black with fade in music and BOOM, logo, shine on logo. It's much more classier.
 
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