This is sick, and you've done a nice job with it. Here's what I would say, it sounds a bit too generic. There are too many of these mixes nowadays with something slow and subtle in the beginning, and then hype drop with drums, hats, dhols, hoys, etc. In terms of building a remix of that type, it's great. I just find it boring because there are sooo many of these. I think what you should do is adopt the song in terms of the meaning and what it's trying to say, and go based on that. Maybe you can change the demeanor of the song that the original musician presented.