Not bad singing bro...Not bad
Saap Segment:
Watch the angles you clap saaps, where you hold them in respect to your body when your clapping them.
Make sure everyone opens them to a good length, and opens them wide. Guy on the left at 3:38-ish is barely keeping it open.
Same with the angles with girls for the katons, especially when the guys and girls do the spins in place.
The two lines you form seem to be offcenter shaded to the left of the stage.
THe two saap claps going down into your bethke seems a little superflous(might want to the thinkin of something else).
I would try to moderate your breaking out phase in the routine , some guysare facing the stage at different angles.r
Girls Also, but not as much, have a similar issue.
Liked the formation idea, and liked you kept high energy and exectution when you formed that horizontal line.
Has to stay throughout, even when your doing the rotating circles idea.
Jhoomer:
For the jhoomer, I really like the choreo to the flow of the beat. Like the bethke going down.
However, please standardized where you want arms and legs to go when doing the moves.
4:50 guy on the left does his own thing when coming up, which while looking cool, takes away from everyone else.
Most people will tell you executing properly and doing great things WITHIN the choreo is what makes a sick dancer,
but you gotta cut out the doing there own thing.
Some guy right after jumped a step, but the choreo was simple, there was good movement, and it played to your strengths.
Work on the fluidity of the jhoomer, but what you have really goes well with the mix.
Luddi Segment:
If you going to do it for that long, I would think there would be some partner interaction. Also some dancers in the back use the
step to take a break -- I CAN SEE YOU GUYS!!
Get rid of the step at 5:20. It doesnt go with the fluidity of the before, and both guys and girls dont do it the same.
Either whip the proper execution and timing, or get rid of it. Right after when the lines switch, guys need to keep there legs up
but the girls have that down.
Liked the partner step and tintara at the back. Folk.
When you do the saamiyan around 5:47, watch peoples arms when they do the pull down step to the body.
Also at 5:51 people have to get way more in going down with the arms and hips when going back.
Dont like the footwork at 5:56. To small and choppy. Lengthen the strides and dont jump up would look better.
Jatt di Chartan
6:07 one girl towards the center leaned the wrong way on the left.
nice explosive intro into the song and formation change!!
6:12 looks like what you did at the luddin segment and onwards for a little bit. I would suggest go with choreo
more like your intro.
Like the formation changes throughout...HOWEVER when doing the jugni keep your arms up and sit a little lower.
Im seeing lackdaisal effort from guys and girls alike.
Good segment.
6:45 on
@ 6:45 Watch the dhamaka arms. Too straight up and down, and some girls pick their legs up higher. Guys you too, though
not to that extent
Legs are starting to die hard guys. Doing faslan arms at 6:57, make them a little more flowy. Looks a little raasy.
If your going to do a step with hands on hips and pick up feet, make sure the feet look HELLA good.
Guys off center at 7:12
7:24 onwards legs are Dying. Girls when your doing the partner step facing one way, pick up the legs. Guys and girls,
when doing the slide at 7:30 get more into it. Spins were good, except one guy was late.
7:44 was sloppy. Gotta have mad cleaning.
Energy low hurt, you guys are better with energy high.
Ending bhangra
8:04 ending to the phummania was a little to abrupt, but I liked that it was different!
Girls work on the spins around 8:12. Short girl there was losing some steam.
8:37 I would make the choreo a little more complex.
The entire ending of the dance looks like three rivers from z. The beginning to mukadama hype on acid. No lie.
Might want to distance yourself from that, also move away from the circles at the end. I wouldnt go down on the knees
again either. It fit more in the last song.
High energy with kicks and jumps which is a plus. nice.
Mela was folk haha.
Great job. Clean it up, keep the energy up like I see you can, and youll get places. You have a slow integration of folk which is good.
I see a lot of teams influences that I would shrug off, as your more than capable of putting together your own
sick choreo and formations.
~ram
