New Performance of Maan Doabe Da need peoples criticism

[Rajthebhangrafreak]

hello guys and girls we just did a new performance i know its not all that but like it was a small stage and one guy quite on us a week before and one of the guys got injured before we got on stage so like we had to improvise right there and now so it was messy we know but we would liek to knwo other things to improve on cuz we love to hear it cuz we all want to become better dancers plz help us out thanks guys- Ranjit Mann AKA Raj
jordis
Black with yellow phumaniya- me , and kulvir
yellow-Hakam, and Sukh
red- Amrit, and Gurvinder
and chimta man lol - visan i think thats how u spell his name lol
Maan Doabe Da Vaisakhi Mela 2010

 

[Rajthebhangrafreak]

60 views and no replys back lol thats great haha

 

[Gsimz]

Hey first things first, get everybody on the same page. It seems as if some dancers are outshining others. But good job for a new team!

 

[Singhlarry23]

Good start for a new team. Keep it up, just improve everyone being on the same steps. Some members have a lot of energy. I liked that. Bro, the black person with the yellow thing just killed it, which I believe is you?

Anyways, good start. Keep it up.

 

[singh89]

Hey overall good performance.. As a team everyone has different style, like you did really well executed the moves and had facial expressions and everything.. Some of your other team mates were a bit sloppy.. When practicing make sure you look over hand movements, overall body postures and if everyone is synchronized.. and also make sure everyone is smiling, it looked as if some of the dancers were not really enjoying themselves up there. Other then that good job, and keep up the good work.

 

[Ricky916]

raj i knw u can dance cuzz we danced 2gthr 4 pioneer but u gotta start teachin the rest of the boyz wat we used to teach our new dancers lik how ur hands,arms,...etc should be
othr than that u guys r improving which is a good sign
jus keep workin at lookin the same and togthr

 

[Ak_Di_Nishani]

Okay first off i wanted to say that you guys have great potential, i loved the way one of the dancers in black keeps his posture very simple and relaxed yet has the right amount of nakhra. I was enjoying this preformance until i heard the amplifier mix, which im 99 percent sure is the exact same mix from Nachdi Jawanis elite 8 mix wether or not you did the same moves does not matter to me, it really let me down because i am very against taking another teams mix without there permission no matter how long it is. Please i advise you to keep that in mind for when you preform next time, i would like to see how you guys progress for the future being a new team and hopefully i can continue to watch your evolution as a team without having to think back and make a comparison to another team whos mix you used.

Best of luck to you in the future

 

[- Raja -]

you guys need to STEP it up on the stamina game. all of you guys were dead half way through the routine. you all need to practise more as a team then individually becasue all of you guys do each move differently. you guys were forgetting moves aswell. practise makes perfect.

 

[ahmad]

Practice. Practice, practice man. It seems like the guy in black with the yellow phumanian is the only one who is actually confident with doing the whole dance and isn't nervous about transitions. Otherwise you guys all seem like you could be good dancers especially the guys in yellow...but don't take the stage until everyone feels confident with the dance

Great first performance thoughh and goood luck!

 

[Sukha]

To add to the feedback already given .. I would suggest to not have repeptitive segments, that is, Don't have jhoomer at the beginning and then again in the middle... well thats what it seemed like to me... I personally think its better to have segments together instead of having say 2 different jhoomer segments in one set

 

[Rajthebhangrafreak]

thanks everyone for all the advice really appreciate it if u guys have other stuff to say please be free and we will take everything into consideration