Not a detailed review, watched the video once all the way through and only went back to get timings for my comments. If you want something more detailed let me know
jfried said:
I'm willing to bet that I'm in the minority with my criticism here, but with just a little more thought to the flow of the mix, I think you guys could win it next time.
I'm actually with you for all of your post. In order, the issues for the set are:
1. Pacing/Flow
2. Execution by dancers
3. Puny thinking (don't be a George)
number 1 is by far the worst offender for this performance because it directly affected the dancing and the gimmicks. There were so many abrupt transitions, songs too fast for choreo, etc. There was just no rhythm built up consistently and I hated the song selection. Segments sometimes felt very forced and rushed. Finale comes to mind here: I get you're trying to do something different, but the phumania was so out of place smushed between two fast bhangra segments, maybe a different song could have helped but neither the mix nor the choreo flowed there and I didn't care for it.
Number 2 is a more pervasive issue. Your dancers didn't dance together and didn't really dance well overall imo. Green jori is a good example from what I remember. The two dancers were very different, and the one with high energy and excellent stage presence was not polished in finishing steps (i.e. legs kicking out sometimes instead of curling, overemphasizing dhamaal lean and not synching the legs with other dancers). Not to particularly call that jori out as the worst offenders, but that's just the color I remember right now. Team needs to be clean, but also individual dancers just need to be better about hitting the form. Especially since gimmicks weren't 100%, the dancing needs to be something to fall back on
I also wonder if a better pace and smoother transitions would have helped the dancers get into more of a flow, something to think about maybe
Number 3 is exactly what Joe said. Maximize your ideas. You spent a lot of time prepping the gimmicks and sometimes the pay off was too little. Take the khunde flags+suit tie gimmick. You spent 16 beats getting it together and then 16 dancing, not a great ratio (as jacob/jfried mentioned). But it was made worse because you went immediately into a blackout! Back to back gimmicks? This is madness! I think it would have worked if there was more pay off, but as it was, roughly 20 seconds of setup for the gimmicks and that's a lot if you're not giving us a full set. It's all relative of course, but as I watched here were some things I though would have made it better:
-more khunda choreo with flags especially a side/single punjab
-breakdown/slowdown in the khunda segment since it's always hype. set up in a formation such that after 4 slow beats of the khunde up, you drop the flags into some design (maybe a V for van city). Something, the flags are much larger than rumaals and could have used that for some interesting visuals
-better choreo in suit and tie. I come from FCB where we danced to Bieber-boyfriend and turquoise jeep so I loved this gimmick, but while the physical suit and tie worked, the choreo didn't for me.
-To help aid the transition, what if you had taken the suit off, held it on your shoulder, and did jhummar to one side. So whole team with suit on left shoulder, body facing right for moving jhummar. Something like that to just move from gimmick to segment. everyone can get rid of the suit together in a clean fashion and it would have been a nice piece of choreo. The tie could have stayed for jhummar and been thrown off in the next transition, come off with the suit, or been taken off when the suits were put away. Again just rough ideas but I think keeping the ties just a bit longer would have been nice photo op and tied the rest of jhummar to suit and tie so it wouldn't be so choppy
These are obviously just my quick personal ideas, so it's possible nobody else would have liked them in your set. But the point is that there was space to do more and stay true to your style, so I think everyone is feeling like there should have been more pay off from the gimmicks.
Anyways, just some quick thoughts. Overall I actually enjoyed it a lot, people seemed like they were having fun on stage and there was good stage presence but the mix and overall construction of the set I think was forced/rushed. A lot of talent on the team, no doubt the next one will blow us away