DJ 1: Appreciate the sampling effort. Sounds like youve double layered your vocal track with the pitched down copy which is causing it clash in some areas of the mids and create a lot of grainy noise. The instrumental layering with the overall arrangement seems very continuous and looped, didn't create enough variation.
DJ 2: Shiiiit, this person went off! Love the jhummar vibe! Dig that different flute lick you use and the lalkara you added before the drop! Really unique stuff! Don't have much feedback for this except the mids in the stereeo fiield could be a bit louder to envelope the vocals more.
DJ 3: Tere tille ton off key
Vocals could have more presence and volume overall.
DJ 4:
Dj 5: Theres so much going on here, samples wise. Kicks are mixed well, but vocals are a bit quiet for me.
DJ 6: The NWA instrumental isn't in key and doesn't fit the vibe of the song to compliment it. I'd first spend time thinking about how the feel of the song can be enhanced for the type of mix you want, and then choose an instrumental that will achieve this. Ofcourse make sure it is in key. Lot of work needs to be done in terms of levels and EQ/compression for drums and vocals. Look up what these different tools are meant to achieve and use them with purpose.
1st: DJ 2
2nd: DJ 5