This was really fun to watch, especially because it's obvious how much you're all enjoying yourselves on stage. Highlights for me were the khunde handoff, first jhummar segment (second was too fast for my taste), and when you guys picked it up at 7:20. That second wind was apparent and you guys really sold your choreo, hopefully you'll get your stamina to a point where the whole set has that kind of energy.
I agree with a lot of what was said above, particularly that hitting vertical lines is a big problem for you guys. Another thing is that everyone needs to stay on beat and not cheat their moves. For example, at 4:19, not everyone turns in to face the circle at the same time because some girls are rushing to get to the next move. You have some cool choreo but it's hard to appreciate it when it's done halfway. Same thing for a lot of your jumps (like 1:47 and 5:43). It's not good enough to just jump 4 times and be done; the goal is to do each of those jumps where everyone is timing it so they go up, get their feet all the way to their butt, and hit the ground at the same time/on beat, otherwise the effect is kinda lost. There are some girls who have good height in their legs throughout (orange and ferozi girls' energy stood out) but overall there are a lot of points when people are tired and they're just kind of swinging their legs up/side to side (like 4:25), instead of actively lifting and keeping an obtuse angle in the knees. Same thing goes for arms; try to really engage the muscles in your limbs when you're moving them, that's how to make both fast and slow moves look strong, especially when you're tired.
Congrats on this performance and how much you've all improved! It's always exciting to see a girls' team working to make an impact on the circuit.
